Super corto no saben no todo lo que tuve que hacer para traducirla y que solo durara mínimo como 5 minutos, tuve creo que hasta meterle virus a mi computadora y me decepcione, me arruinaron la noche pensando que marcus me iba a detonar para que solo me dijera que esta bien o se fuera... Me rompio mi corazoncito...
I loved this so much! Though I do wish there could be more endings< it was well written and made. I feel like this would do really good as a yandere game! Keep up the good work!
the way he's so calm about it no matter which choice you pick lol i love him so much i hope we can learn more about him in the future!! awesome work<333
very short but truly enjoyable visual novel! i wish we could get to know more about Marcus. He's a very interesting character. I love the design, the visual style of your VN! 10/10 no drama
Waa!! Thank you all for the supportive and lovely comments. Currently, I'm on a hiatus and I'm sorry I can't reply to them all. Reading it really warms my heart. Thank you once again for playing! May your day be joyful and hopefully you won't encounter any serial killers! (Unless, it's Marcus maybe) <3
My first choice was "I can't help you with that." It really struck me by surprise when he just accepted being handed in to the police, if I had known he would just hand himself in so quickly i would have chosen that from the start lolol. Five stars!
I'd like to see more from this Marcus guy and get to know more about his morality. Does he have no problems killing but is specifically moral about being a good roommate or is he not bothersome so he has nothing that could stand in between him and having a peaceful living space? Stuff like that.
Hi!! Please thank your friend for me— 谢谢! <3 I'm really happy they enjoyed the game honored they want to make fanart! (Also, thank you for taking the time to pass this message along for your friend!)
They're absolutely welcome to draw Marcus! Fanart is totally okay and appreciated.
As for the questions:
1. Nope! As of now, he only has the front facing sprite from the game itself.
2. There's a few details I can answer here!
Likes: His roommate, blood
Dislikes: Untidy places
Age: Mid-20s
Personality: Polite, charming, considerate
Hobbies: Murder
3. The current game works as a complete experience on its own, but I may expand it more in the future!
Thank you again for the love and encouragement! Please tell your friend I'd love to see their fanart if they share it. <3
Hi Mich, thank you for the reply! My friend has drawn some fanart and has other questions as well. Here is their original message:
"I've drawn some fan art of Markus 💖💖 I really, really love him! 🥰 Besides that, I have a few questions for you:
1. What is Markus's background story like? When I'm creating fan works, I often find it hard to let my imagination run wild because there isn't enough information. The creation part is secondary; I'm mainly just really curious about why Markus became the way he is, and why he chooses to live with the protagonist (some people speculate that Markus might like the protagonist. He never kills the protagonist, he's willing to leave evidence openly, and he helps the protagonist get rid of annoying people...).
2. If it's convenient for you, could you please leave me an email address? I'm afraid of troubling my friend by asking them to send things for me all the time :(((( It's completely fine if you can't! Thank you so much for answering my questions and for creating this game."
Ahh!! Sorry for the late reply! The fanarts are so cute (I want to hang them on my wall.. TT). Thank you so much!!
As for the questions again!
1) I plan on exploring Marcus's backstory in the extended version, sooo it will be a secret for now. But I love that you're very curious about this serial killer's past!!
2) No problem! I don't mind leaving you my business related email, feel free to contact me on uncookfish.dev@gmail.com ^^*
Thank you so much for enjoying my game and taking the time to draw Marcus <3
Hi!! So sorry that I just saw this comment. Thank you so much for the kind words and I'm so so glad that you liked the plot and endings!! Thank you for playing and taking your time to leave this lovely comment <3
The background is really cute (so is Marcus) and I love the pixelation :3 This game makes me wonder what I would do, if I found out I was living with a serial killer. I'd probably be too scared to call the police, in case I end up on a kill list. At least he's a decent roommate...
Haha thank you!! I'm so glad you liked the background (and Marcus o-O). And true! I think most of us would be way too scared to do anything in that situation, and that's one of my inspirations for the game LOL. But, at least he keeps the place clean+ ^^
Thank you once again for playing and the comment!! Hehe
just finished playing your game and I simply wanted to tell you that it was so nice ! I love to play O2A2 games and yours definitely wasn’t an exception at all ! Your art is gorgeous, the story while simple is an interesting premise and you managed to make a good dynamic between Marcus and us in such a short time which definitely shows you’re indeed very talented in the creative field ! The fact that it’s your first game makes it even more exciting to follow your progress and since I’ve read your devlog I’m happy to know we’ll hear of Marcus again :) anyways just wanted to congratulate you for doing this well have a nice day (╹◡╹)♡
Ahh!! Thank you so much for your kind words, Asuna!! <3 I'm very flattered and genuinely honored from your compliments HAHAH
Thank you for reading the devlog as well! I had a lot of fun working on the game itself and also their dynamic. I'm really looking forward to sharing more of Marcus soon ^^
Thanks again for taking the time to write this, it made my day! (≧▽≦)
you fully deserve the praise so no need to thanks me after all I’m just sharing facts ♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪
We totally see that you had fun and honestly i think that’s the reason why the game ended up really enjoyable which is awesome o(^o^)o
And you’re welcome I’m glad it made you happy then ! I wanted to make sure people reading the comments before playing knew they were in for a good moment (๑>◡<๑)
HII I just wanted to stop by to say that I LOOVED your game!!
For a short, limited vn like this one you sure did such a great job at creating the eerie yet alluring atmosphere. The choice of the sound efects and background music were also so immeresive and made 10 minutes feel like 10 seconds :')
Absoulte fan of your artwork btw, would love to see more of your work in the future!!
Hi, Alex! Thank you so much!! <3 I'm super happy and honored that you loved my game
I'm glad that I was able to capture the eerie and alluring atmosphere! I've always enjoyed games that had a similar setting and I was inspired by them. :] HAHAHA I'm also so glad that it was immersive for you! Unfortunately, due to jam restrictions, the game had to be very very short :'>
Ahh!! Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you'll be looking forward for my future works!
Once again, thank you for playing and your lovely comment!! <3<3
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too little endings, other than that, it's good!
amasing game really loved it
Super corto no saben no todo lo que tuve que hacer para traducirla y que solo durara mínimo como 5 minutos, tuve creo que hasta meterle virus a mi computadora y me decepcione, me arruinaron la noche pensando que marcus me iba a detonar para que solo me dijera que esta bien o se fuera... Me rompio mi corazoncito...
Amazing game!! I swear I read a fanfic inspired (or that inspired) by it!
aaaa this was rlly short, i wish it were longer but i love it so much!! the art is really nice!
I like this a lot was really good well made like the style to was rlly good i enjoyed it hope you make another one soon <3
I loved this so much! Though I do wish there could be more endings< it was well written and made. I feel like this would do really good as a yandere game! Keep up the good work!
When is Android version coming out?? It looks cute ;3
the way he's so calm about it no matter which choice you pick lol i love him so much i hope we can learn more about him in the future!! awesome work<333
ahahahahahaha I love this, we're such a vibe too
very short but truly enjoyable visual novel! i wish we could get to know more about Marcus. He's a very interesting character. I love the design, the visual style of your VN! 10/10 no drama
I love mmy boi Marcus, really respectful guy!
Waa!! Thank you all for the supportive and lovely comments. Currently, I'm on a hiatus and I'm sorry I can't reply to them all. Reading it really warms my heart. Thank you once again for playing! May your day be joyful and hopefully you won't encounter any serial killers! (Unless, it's Marcus maybe) <3
really like your writing styleee its funny and the art is also pretty <3
My first choice was "I can't help you with that." It really struck me by surprise when he just accepted being handed in to the police, if I had known he would just hand himself in so quickly i would have chosen that from the start lolol. Five stars!
This was awesome and very straight forward gameplay, it took me 5 minutes max and the storyline was so good that I would play if it got an expansion.
I loved it SO MUCH!! Although I wish it was longer.
Sweet,short.I like it
Brad from accounting.💀 10/10 I love how the music stops and the three dots just slowly appear with the sound, it makes the suspense so good.
"who will do the dishes now?" BROOO 😭😭🙏 10/10 <33
I bursted out laughing at that.
This is amazing! The art and the character design? 10/10 Really great work considering the short time span. Congrats! Looking forward to seeing more!
OMG, I love it <3
Hiii!! Sorry to bother you but I really love your game and I was wondering if you perhaps accepted translations (spanish in this case)?? Thank youu :)
the art is phenomenal i love his character also hes such a sweet heart iw anna kiss him
i think i lov him
10/10
Sequel??????????
I'd like to see more from this Marcus guy and get to know more about his morality. Does he have no problems killing but is specifically moral about being a good roommate or is he not bothersome so he has nothing that could stand in between him and having a peaceful living space? Stuff like that.
7/10
gotta love the respectfulness of him, a classy man, i like it PICASSO
Yes, yes (nods)! He is indeed respectful and classy. Thank you for the comment and for playing, Rei!! <33
这么美的立绘居然没有mac版,我的心好痛!!!
谢谢哈哈!心痛的是我啦,目前还没有 Mac版,但我 会努力想办法的!~
Hi, my friend from China saw your game and liked it a lot, but they couldn’t access this website so I am writing on their behalf ><
They would love to fanart your character and wanted to ask for your permission. They also have some other questions:
1. Does Marcus have a full character model (front, side, and back views)?
2. What are Marcus's other character details? (For example: height, weight, likes/dislikes, age, personality, etc.)
3. Is the current game release the "final version" or is it "still in development, with more chapters planned for the future"?
Thank you for making such an interesting game!
Hi!! Please thank your friend for me— 谢谢! <3 I'm really happy they enjoyed the game honored they want to make fanart! (Also, thank you for taking the time to pass this message along for your friend!)
They're absolutely welcome to draw Marcus! Fanart is totally okay and appreciated.
As for the questions:
1. Nope! As of now, he only has the front facing sprite from the game itself.
2. There's a few details I can answer here!
Likes: His roommate, blood
Dislikes: Untidy places
Age: Mid-20s
Personality: Polite, charming, considerate
Hobbies:
Murder3. The current game works as a complete experience on its own, but I may expand it more in the future!
Thank you again for the love and encouragement! Please tell your friend I'd love to see their fanart if they share it. <3
Hi Mich, thank you for the reply!
My friend has drawn some fanart and has other questions as well. Here is their original message:
"I've drawn some fan art of Markus 💖💖 I really, really love him! 🥰 Besides that, I have a few questions for you:
1. What is Markus's background story like? When I'm creating fan works, I often find it hard to let my imagination run wild because there isn't enough information. The creation part is secondary; I'm mainly just really curious about why Markus became the way he is, and why he chooses to live with the protagonist (some people speculate that Markus might like the protagonist. He never kills the protagonist, he's willing to leave evidence openly, and he helps the protagonist get rid of annoying people...).
2. If it's convenient for you, could you please leave me an email address? I'm afraid of troubling my friend by asking them to send things for me all the time :(((( It's completely fine if you can't! Thank you so much for answering my questions and for creating this game."
Ahh!! Sorry for the late reply! The fanarts are so cute (I want to hang them on my wall.. TT). Thank you so much!!
As for the questions again!
1) I plan on exploring Marcus's backstory in the extended version, sooo it will be a secret for now. But I love that you're very curious about this serial killer's past!!
2) No problem! I don't mind leaving you my business related email, feel free to contact me on uncookfish.dev@gmail.com ^^*
Thank you so much for enjoying my game and taking the time to draw Marcus <3
Here's a little extra thanks from Marcus
great game >////<
tho, I hope we can really date the serial killer
Thank you for playing and for your kind words!! <3 + You say that now... wait until he tries to kill you..! o<o
awwww 😭
I like the game very much, the graphics and sound effects are very good, I hope the author can continue to do it.
Thanks you so much, this really means a lot to me! <33
Totally get the MC, it is hard to find a decent roommate. Well-executed tense and uncomfortable atmosphere.
Thank you for playing!! And yes, exactly, I'm so glad you picked up on that! The roommate dynamic was definitely meant to feel tense and unsettling.
hi the art is gorgeous and i really like the plot and endings !!
Hi!! So sorry that I just saw this comment. Thank you so much for the kind words and I'm so so glad that you liked the plot and endings!! Thank you for playing and taking your time to leave this lovely comment <3
of course^^
The background is really cute (so is Marcus) and I love the pixelation :3 This game makes me wonder what I would do, if I found out I was living with a serial killer. I'd probably be too scared to call the police, in case I end up on a kill list. At least he's a decent roommate...
Haha thank you!! I'm so glad you liked the background (and Marcus o-O). And true! I think most of us would be way too scared to do anything in that situation, and that's one of my inspirations for the game LOL. But, at least he keeps the place clean+ ^^
Thank you once again for playing and the comment!! Hehe
just finished playing your game and I simply wanted to tell you that it was so nice ! I love to play O2A2 games and yours definitely wasn’t an exception at all ! Your art is gorgeous, the story while simple is an interesting premise and you managed to make a good dynamic between Marcus and us in such a short time which definitely shows you’re indeed very talented in the creative field ! The fact that it’s your first game makes it even more exciting to follow your progress and since I’ve read your devlog I’m happy to know we’ll hear of Marcus again :) anyways just wanted to congratulate you for doing this well have a nice day (╹◡╹)♡
Ahh!! Thank you so much for your kind words, Asuna!! <3 I'm very flattered and genuinely honored from your compliments HAHAH
Thank you for reading the devlog as well! I had a lot of fun working on the game itself and also their dynamic. I'm really looking forward to sharing more of Marcus soon ^^
Thanks again for taking the time to write this, it made my day! (≧▽≦)
you fully deserve the praise so no need to thanks me after all I’m just sharing facts ♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪
We totally see that you had fun and honestly i think that’s the reason why the game ended up really enjoyable which is awesome o(^o^)o
And you’re welcome I’m glad it made you happy then ! I wanted to make sure people reading the comments before playing knew they were in for a good moment (๑>◡<๑)
HII I just wanted to stop by to say that I LOOVED your game!!
For a short, limited vn like this one you sure did such a great job at creating the eerie yet alluring atmosphere. The choice of the sound efects and background music were also so immeresive and made 10 minutes feel like 10 seconds :')
Absoulte fan of your artwork btw, would love to see more of your work in the future!!
Lots of love <3
Hi, Alex! Thank you so much!! <3 I'm super happy and honored that you loved my game
I'm glad that I was able to capture the eerie and alluring atmosphere! I've always enjoyed games that had a similar setting and I was inspired by them. :] HAHAHA I'm also so glad that it was immersive for you! Unfortunately, due to jam restrictions, the game had to be very very short :'>
Ahh!! Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that you'll be looking forward for my future works!
Once again, thank you for playing and your lovely comment!! <3<3
super too perfect roommate! even we against him still not kill mc! too kind!
Glad you like Marcus!! Yes, he's very kind despite being a killer hehe
Thank you so much for playing!! <3